This short piece was writing for my fiction course at Future Learn. In it, you needed to describe one of the characters from a photo they supplied and focus on the character’s appearance.
He sat down at the front of the bus, shoulders slightly hunched, the thick camouflage jacket hiding a deceptively lean frame. Long grey hair that may once have been blonde was tied up in a hastily made bun, the cerise pink hair elastic pilfered from his daughter’s room in stark contrast with the greens and browns of the jacket meant to hide him in plain sight. Three day’s worth of grey stubble lined an ageing but handsome face. He stared at the road, noting every block the bus passed, ignoring the other passengers with their phones, books, tablets, and cameras.
WHO IS HE?!!?!? *dun dun dunnnn* sounds like a psychopath to me.
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Mwahaha! You’ll have to wait and see! (But he’s not a psychopath…)
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Awww jokes thats cool I’m wondering why he wants to hide in plain sight yet looks like he tumbled dried inside the kids section of a Legit store.
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“tumbled dried inside the kids section of a Legit store” XD XD XD
All I can say is… mwahahahaha…
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Great piece!
I’ve nominated you for a Liebster Award…
https://ronelthemythmaker.wordpress.com/2017/05/05/a-blog-award-and-a-bit-of-fun/
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Wow! Thank you! 😀 😀 😀 😀
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